Comments for The Techna Institute

Comment on 1st Drafts received March2-9th by Gunther Eysenbach, MD MPH FACMI

Gunther Eysenbach, MD MPH FACMI — Wed, 14 Mar 2012 15:41:43 +0000

Thanks Ben – a fair amount of editing and reworking is required. Should we start working on these now, or are you working on them? Personally I would prefer to work within the sections/headings required for the full application (32 pages max.):
.Performance report
.Research or technology development
.Team
.Benefits to Canadians
.Infrastructure
.Sustainability
Perhaps the above sections should first be moved into a document with these headings.
If we open this up for collaborative editing, are people comfortable with editing these here, or should we rather create a Google document? (for longer documents this may be better).

Comment on Principal Users: by Gunther Eysenbach, MD MPH FACMI

Gunther Eysenbach, MD MPH FACMI — Wed, 14 Dec 2011 09:20:19 +0000

Can we perhaps add 1-2 sentences to each PU outlining how they would use the infrastructure?

Comment on ORF NOI section Commercialization Implementation Plan by Jennifer Stinson

Jennifer Stinson — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 23:03:53 +0000

Hi Gunther
This looks great. My only comment is regarding commercialization of innovations developed at SickKids – this will be through our corporate ventures department for the pediatric m-health satellite unit.
Jen

Comment on ORF NOI section Visibility in the scientific community by Kelly Lane, B.Sc

Kelly Lane, B.Sc — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 19:35:14 +0000

Included Dante previous comments.

Comment on ORF NOI section Societal Impact by Kelly Lane, B.Sc

Kelly Lane, B.Sc — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 19:29:14 +0000

Added Dante’s previous comments.

Comment on ORF NOI section by Kelly Lane, B.Sc

Kelly Lane, B.Sc — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 19:23:15 +0000

Word limit for the last 3 sections ["Economic Impact," "Societal Impact," and "Ontario's Visibility...."] is 1500. It appears that we are well over and need to trim content.

Comment on ORF NOI section Visibility in the scientific community by Gunther Eysenbach, MD MPH FACMI

Gunther Eysenbach, MD MPH FACMI — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 18:41:12 +0000

Sorry, I really have no clue how to address this section. A lot of bullshitting is required for this section.

Comment on ORF NOI section Project Description by Gunther Eysenbach, MD MPH FACMI

Gunther Eysenbach, MD MPH FACMI — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 17:14:35 +0000

not sure what the virtual clinic or On-PROST is – somebody needs to fill this in. TAHSN is clear – but honestly I am not sure about this whole section – seems to get into to much details – should we just remove the last 2 sentence?

Comment on Techna Launch a Success! by Tracey Lui, M.Sc

Tracey Lui, M.Sc — Thu, 10 Nov 2011 19:33:46 +0000

Cheers to David Jaffray and the rest of the Techna team!

Comment on Techna Launch a Success! by Gunther Eysenbach, MD MPH FACMI

Gunther Eysenbach, MD MPH FACMI — Thu, 10 Nov 2011 16:34:54 +0000

Congrats to everybody involved, and in particular David Jaffray!